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Fixing a crash blossom

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I recently read the headline <a href="https://arstechnica.com/?p=1973580" author="Scharon Harding" source="Ars Technica">Vacuum suction-mounted wireless TV zip lines off faulty walls to safety</a>. What an incredible <a href="https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=crash%20blossom">crash blossom</a>. The author used one hyphen but more punctuation would have been better. How about: <dl dt_class="field">Original Vacuum suction-mounted wireless TV zip lines off faulty walls to safety Add punctuation Vacuum<hl>-</hl>suction-mounted<hl>,</hl> wireless TV zip<hl>-</hl>lines off faulty walls to safety. Remove redundancy <del>Vacuum-</del>Suction-mounted, wireless TV zip-lines off faulty walls to safety. Restore phrase Suction-mounted, wireless TV zip-lines <hl>to safety</hl> off faulty walls <del>to safety</del>. Use preposition Suction-mounted, wireless TV zip-lines to safety <hl>from</hl> faulty walls. Precise condition Suction-mounted, wireless TV zip-lines to safety <hl>if wall fails</hl>. </dl>